Kaimo 4/1/2007 Drop me some critiques please!

[Kaimo]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a8JmPJMOxSU

Thanks in advance!

[Alchemist]

Oi, it's private. No one can see it unless we're on your friends list.

-A

[Kaimo]

whoah... this is like from a year ago. how the hell did it pop up here.

Anyways, this one's more current.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q9GbHNl2gsQ

[Alchemist]

Oh shi-! My bad duder. I saw this under 'similar threads' and didn't check the year. *facepalm*

You're pretty damn good. That's all I gotta say.

-A

[syphon]

Yo Kaimo ... well am not a pro but if you would not mind ;)

For first minute man you have pretty solid isolations for reall ... i saw your eralier stuff and man you did a big step in this, you are clean and sharp. Isolation part was really good no critics so far. Later on you try some footwork but i think u should slow down also in that part and work it out and play lil bit down there, also you should use more funky hips move (but thats just sugestion). Mainly fix your isolation better with legs and transitions and man you will be pretty solid enemy :) ..Isolations is now your pretty strong weapon ..just workit on those areas also.

Keep it workin ..respect

[Phinite_PDX]

I agree with Syphon, your legs seem to be your weak point. I must say that your upper body isolations are great, but I would like to see some more dynamic shoulder/chest movement (think larger range of motion.) Your hips don't need to be more funky, your style doesn't really need it. However you could lean out left or right cross from whatever your upper body's direction is to make your upper body movements look just that more dramatic in change. Keep it up, you're doing great.