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[kian]

Maybe you guys could tell me somethings to work on, thx

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iTT0vL5aq78

[Graph]

Looks like you have some nice ideas going for yourself. I'd say you should slow down though, or at least vary your speeds. Sometimes you are all over the place. Also try and look up more when you get down, you look down at the ground or your body for just about the entire duration of the clip.

Waves could be smoother, so in that aspect you should slow down a lot with them and really show each joint rolling/lifting.

Anyways man, keep goin at it and you'll get better!


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[TETRIS]

good stuff bro~

Something that i noticed right away was your speed. you seemed real quick and rushed at times, i would suggest trying to slow it down a bit and take your time a bit more.

I liked alot of your waving movements, alot of good stuff goin on there. You also had some dope ground movements goin, i would suggest you keep goin with that.

I would also practice your arm angles, get them more solid and place them in better slots or positions.

Other than that, i think your on the right path, i liked it :-)

-TETRIS