Critique my freestyle vid

[artelelo]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LQbcKxVdXcE&feature=share
(watch out for some funny ass random parts in the video..)


Here is a video of me just feeling the song Erotic by Keyshia Cole, just turned on the camera/music and went at it.. always looking to improve


Looking for the following Critiques..

- Things I can improve on (make it look cleaner, slow this part down, etc)
- Things I am doing good on ( help me know what parts you like, positive feedback is just as helpful! )
- Any information on working on groove/flow
- Any spatial concepts to apply to dance (grids/boxes, whatever)
- How to organize my practices, (how you practice, to tweak how I practice)
- ANYTHING TO GIVE ME WISDOM TO GROW AS A DANCER