View Full Version : Clips for Critique

09-06-2007, 01:42 PM
Hey guys... greetings from Floasis.net :p These are two clips (each a different style) of stuff I've been working on that incorporates a bit of popping concepts into each style so I was wondering if you all can give me some advice from that perspective. Thx :)



09-06-2007, 07:15 PM
Wow very different style 8)

Its almost like a mix of freestyle/hiphop/waving/and liquid.

I really liked your ground work, they were very out of the norm and you actually gave me some real cool ideas!

in my opinion alot of parts were too fast for my taste, maybe if you slowed it down a bit esp the part when there were waves/liquid involved it would look more trippy.

either way i thought its a cool experimental style u got goin there.

Keep it up!

09-07-2007, 12:02 AM
dope, and i can clearly see martial arts influence

keep it up 8)

09-07-2007, 12:35 AM
Dayyuum son, I'm really feelin that...

Doin a style and feel i never seen before, i like that energy. ALthough sometimes too much, I think it needs to be controlled more, right now its very fierce , free flowing and chaotic like: i believe with more discipline u can control this energy and take your experiemental style to a whole new level. (this comes with experience i believe...)

I agree with tetris, when u go into the very illusional liquid styles and intricate hand flows....slow down the speed so the viewers can take in the illusions and concept...then burst back out with that flowing energy of urs... with control of course! Cant wait to see where u evolve with this! I can see alotta ppl biting ur ish in the future haha

09-09-2007, 02:05 PM
Thx guys for all your advice :) Def. gonna try to work on all that stuff :)